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Old 11-30-04, 09:25 AM   #3
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your dope at this mate. that was a short verse but seriously ill. flowed well, vocab was nice, you were on point and i was feelin this. this is the kind of shit i read and think how i can improve my own shit. dope shit....keep it up.

feel free to leave feed in my own OM linked in my sig. feedback is always very much appreciated. onesky
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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