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Old 11-30-04, 03:27 PM   #175
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Originally Posted by Socrates
With a record that's as bad as Shaq's freethrow sheet....
Is that why u hide it now, kause u know you're weak??....
not a punch
Ima keep baggin on your record kause your rhyming is cheap....
When this battle is over, they'll find your remains in a garbage heap....
no....look into the concept you had in the set up
Around my way i'm considered a heat champ....
Kause my flows light up blocks like street lamps....
never do self glorification....boooooooo!
You can't ground my supersonic even if you started trying....
You betta go somewheres else wit them EBAY rhymes u buyin....
almost a good concept needs better wording
Toxic or toxin, panic your logic wit bare knuckle boxin....
Combinin punches, kicks, & elbows jus to add extra props in....
i like for some reason

You gotta look into what a punch is then you can start elevating cuz I see potential.


thanks mayne, im always open for new concepts and suggestions
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