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Old 11-30-04, 04:22 PM   #4
teknikal vuez
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Voted For: Artik Phrost

-= THIS WAS A HOTT BATTLE =-

Bizzy:
Your Verse Was Nice.. Had Good Punches Lines.. No Real Good Wordplay.. Good Multies.. But Not A Good Structure..
I Believe if You Verse Was Structured You Could of Took This Battle..

Artik Phrost:
Great Verse, Good Punches, Good Wordplay, Good Structure.. And Good Multies.. The Reason You Took It Was Mainly Because Of Your Structure And Personals.. Good Job..



If i have to come back and explain i will, just pm me..



PLEASE !! PLEASE !! PLEASE !! return the favor....
hit up a battle in my sig!!!
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