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Old 11-30-04, 05:41 PM   #13
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Voted For: teknikal vuez

Tekinkal got this....... I enjoyed readiong your verse......... You had some good worplay..... and your rhymes were decent..... But you had some streched lines... adn that isnt good.... but .. lol.... its all good...... And your punches hit pretty hard.... adn your flow was alright io guess but your structure messed that up a lil bit... But opver all I think you diod pretty good...... Nice job... Keep it uo...

Hype- You didnt do all that great......................... Alls I have to say.. is you gootta elevate.... your verse was way to short adn your linez were sterched some too.... You punches didnt reall even hit hard at all....... and your flow wasnt that good....... But alls you gotta do is elevate homie... Over all you didnt do really good.... but... no hate......

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