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Old 11-30-04, 07:43 PM   #17
Adam
 
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Voted For: Empire

Empire - nice drop man, you got some good poetry skills...shit was real deep and you could really get into it. the ending is my favourite part. nicely done, good drop.....8.5/10

Socrates - for your first poem you didn't quite well...didn't come as strong as Empire, but you did pretty good. i liked your idea and all, but i just couldn't get into it as much as i could empires...keep writing poems and you could get pretty good at poetry...7/10

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