ok here we go

both verses where ok

de jure i didnt like them simple punches that you had around the frist bars and mid but overall you had some nice ones those

zion

i liked his verses betta cuz he had combined vocab, multies and punches in a well way


wordplay=both
vocab=zion
punches=both
flow=ziom

my vote goes to zion

need more explanation just holla back