Voted For: L.I.
ok ummmm
li u had nice imagery
and the emotion was wonderful and heart felt
i liked the complexity in this piee....
and the ending was remarkably dope
i mind u had the better complexity
but the emotion lacked just a little
and the imagery however was quite nice i must say
u had a great opener and start
but feel off towards the ending
overall im sorry but L.I one this do to overall better imagery,emotion,and ending
props to both
return the favor...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...185#post1761185