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Old 11-30-04, 09:58 PM   #6
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Voted For: T-Wrecks

v/ t-wrecks no explanation needed lol


but so this dont get deleted ill say this.. rambo your first bar was gay as fuck lmao it was funny tho but gay.. twrecks u started out wack but got dope when the verse moved on good shit... good structure and wordplay and once again good metaphors... rambo your rhymes are still too basic elevate some more... use harder punches and better structure and forget the slashes //// at the ends of yuor bars it looks gay
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