View Single Post
Old 11-30-04, 11:01 PM   #193
headgames
Banned: Cheating
 
Posts: 73
IP:

Bored so..... 4fil verse vs. Sabotage

This verse took me a while... but I didn’t flee rapverse
Takes thought preparing lines, all about you wackness
too simple man
He’s flowing electricity, but if he has power I doubt it
He raps so shocking;. he could cause a power outage
wack
He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich
Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch
pre school shit
“Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see
Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me
wack
Most kids got an alter ego but this kids got an ultra ego
“The building blocks of life” his blocks are just plain Lego
Getting closer
Another council member… must be their worst employee
Sabotage your whole operation, at trying to dickride me
gay
Hes to elusive, cause he rhymes wack so hes unnoticed
The council, their laws to be wack, so this is my protest
wack wack

Your trying to hard with the structure, your putting to much focus in it, take a look at some of the sites legends and how they battle, try to elevate from there, your coming too simple
  Reply With Quote