Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

hmmmm ok
wow magnif your really coming around
ur emotion and imagery were there
and the message you sent in this sounds on point
but what need work is your spelling at some points
but beside that not bad

ingenius
u had nice vocabulary and werd choice
but the imagery lacked just a little
and your emotion was ok
i couldn't quite say anything more about your piece
because i felt u should of wrote more to this topic

but anyways for obvious reasons this goes to magnificent

decent battle yall'

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