Voted For: teknikal vuez

Drop ~this wack~, wit more ~raps than bags~
and put the Trey Duece to his Chest Like A Six Pack of Abs =-
(decent opener, flows well, and hits, but try not to use gunz...8/10)

You get ~bitched slapped~, for ~acting bad, you fag~
You say my punches dont hit? But you absorb every jab =-
(nice multie use and wordplay...8/10)

Your just a ~terrible fad~ something that ~Goes Away~
Cause Like The Flaming AK Your Also Known ~As Gay~ =-
(kinda weak closer, but good flow, and wordplay, 7/10)


Then realign the stars to read “u don’t have shit on my raps”
If dick riding wasn’t breaking the rules, he’d sit on my lap
(kinda dont make sense, how do u start with then? n e ways, nice flow, and decent punch, 7/10)

Now read your sig out loud, and quickly beg for repentance
Cause you can’t beat me, if u cant make a complete sentence
(WEAK BAR, BUT HAS GOOD FLOW, 6/10)

Its easy to continue my murderous rampage, so I’m still flowin’
But I destroyed you in the first 2 lines...Why am I still going?
(WEAK CLOSER, NICE FLOW, AND VOCAB, 6/10)

AIGHT..teknikal vuez..YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD, STRUCTURE IS OKAY, BUT TRY NOT TO BE ALL OVER THE PLACE, JUST FLOW MAN....NONE OF THAT ~~@@#$!@#$@# SHIT...IT MAKES YOUR VERSE LOOK UNPROFESSIONAL, AND SLOPPY...N E WAYS...YOU HAD GOOD USE OF VOCAB, MULTIES, PUNCHES WERE GOOD, AND EVERYLINE BEAT LYRICALS...SO U GET MY VOTE BECAUSE IT WAS JUST BETTER.



AIGHT..LYRICAL..YOUR FLOW IS GOOD, AS WELL AS YOUR STRUCTURE, BUT THIS IS A BATTLE OF PUNCHES, DISSES, MULTIES, ETC...YOU DONT HAVE ANY THAT ARE GOOD...WORK ON YOUR DISS FACTOR, AND ELEVATE FROM THERE...OTHER THAN THAT YOU ARE OK...


VOTE TEKNIKAL VUEZ

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