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Old 12-01-04, 12:38 AM   #8
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i had to read this piece twice........anxiety...i had a hard time getting into what you were saying..but as the verse went on..it got enourmously more potent with imagery and emotion....as well as flow...it's like you had a difficult time starting...and than it just started comin....and 2 by 4...as far as I know..this is the first drop i've read from you..but it wasn't what I expected from reading the feedback...i felt you could have done a lot better...lines seemed forced...and a lot of the rhyming words left kind of a dry un-emotional feeling.....however....i did like this piece a lot....and the reason why I'm not saying it was incredible..because I know anxiety is very talented..and i can see you have madd potential...so it's more of a compliment than a diss.much respect to both of you...check the sigg for om's fam
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