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12-01-04, 03:41 AM
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~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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Nice, was feeling the imagery.. focus was there and it keeps the readers attention, not once did i want skip to the last line.. was a very nice piece.. and nice flow to it, i'd say 8.7/10....................
keep droppin' your stuff...
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