Thread: Essence of I
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Old 12-01-04, 03:48 AM   #4
~Lady Fiya~
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this had a lot of emotion into it, i was feeling this poem you wrote...
Yet i am nothing
for God is the Alpha and Omega
but I
I am just the IT and inbetween
the most powerful being
I am high
^is like a reality check for sum people.. a form of realization.. very nice piece and i like how your structure is random, because most people think poetry has to be in stanzas or equal lines and rhyme, however it doesn't.. and the way you wrote this can be a guideline to future poets... if u don't get post of the month for your drops, then something is terribly wrong with RV... nice shit..
will peep your other works, i have an open mic called armegeddon in my sig (a long nice collab).. hit that up sum time. pz pz
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