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Originally Posted by ·Fåtål LÿRîcîSt·
iight word
Listen in rap im sumtin like jordan or ali in his prime....
Sickening rhymes, battle me n u outta ya mind.........
My pal is ma nine, Wen i battle u im claimin u mine....
Aint no point in battlin faggotz its a waste of ma time..
I get real mad wen niggaz duck like hiding beaverz....
NIggaz cood catch these bullets like they wide receivers...
Wit skillz so ill dat ya preachin for help....................
Mind.Above.Body Dopeness speaks for itself.............
lemme kno wha cha think iight jus a lil sumtin holla bak 1
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At the moment I dont think you could hold a spot down man,...
You come nice, Flowed nice, vocab nice but could be uped and
the complexity wasn't their or any wordplay or anything.
Solid basic verse but upping for complexity,.. Elevate a bit more
man and come back.
Stay up
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