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Old 12-01-04, 08:21 AM   #55
teknikal vuez
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Voted For: WeeDex

<<< BREAKDOWN >>>

WeedEx:
I wont even say this punks name in this line/
Its too long, shit and I cant be bothered to make it rhyme/
Weak Weak Weak Opener
One hand typer at home with his wrist he flicks/
Cant even find your dick, insisting that you are the shit/
um ok, not good at all
It would take fifty minutes just to pop your zits/
Poor women, Find it? You cant even spell clit-or-is!//
um yea, pop your zits. rotlmfao ... weak
I Look on the web cam and wat can I see?
You look so ill, are you dying of HIV?
hmm, disrupted your structure for that line.. not good
Dirty flirting with a miner/ climbing the ladder of the homo’s society/
um yea.. ok
Its certain/ working, thru the night-long shaking off flies and flees/
I’ll do a mass operation/ attract a pump action, then hide your knees?/
Whats that no answer, Now that’s fly to me!//
ok, thats alright i guess lol
one more thing to add before the verse is diminished/
Like Bizzy will be, Sixx, lay down, your fuckin finished!!
um lets just say this wasnt a good finisher..

WeeDeex:
Hmm. wack rhymes, your structure and flow is good.. you just need to learn how to throw a punch, and a personal.. learn to get some good wordplay.. take your time with a verse.. cause keystyling isnt doin it for you.. thats just the honest truth dun..




SixX da FinisH:
you got nuffn on me... ya game is stock
i got the game on lock, grab the 9 aim n cock
um good multies, gun talk is played out unless you use it right.. to much self rep..
POP! givin ya chest sum flesh wounds
ya shyt is like a dyslexic in a spelling bee, unsuccessful
good punch, but way to stretched from your flow.. learn to ease it in
i keep ma guns fully loaded,leavin u shell-shocked
im movin ki's cuz i lift bags like bell hops
to much self rep... your dissing him, not gloating for yourself remember that..
callin yourself weedex only shows ur im-mature
like im "premature" ima 'bust' like u 'never did before'
ok that was really bad...
wen ya hear my verses, im givin ya wet-pants
this shytz over, im out like a boner in sweatpants
LMFAO, AND YOU SAID HE WAS WACK LOL

Sixx:
Ok your verse had way to much self rep in it, and the disses you did have, were not good at all.. learn not to self rep and learn how to throw a unique punch, your flow and multies are good now concentrate on throwin those personal punches.. it will turn your verse fire



Punches : Weed
Flow : Both
Personals : N/A
Wordplay : N/A
Multies : Sixx
Consistency : Weed
Internals : N/A
Vokab : N/A
Fav Line: N/A
Enjoyment : N/A


This just wasnt a good battle, but im giving it to weedex because sixx had way to much self rep, and the guntalk really demoted his verse.. if you wouldnt of self repped you probablly would have taken this.. weedex.. get your game up..
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