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Old 12-01-04, 08:33 AM   #9
teknikal vuez
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Voted For: Method.

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Method.:
punchlines self inflicted this kid got lunchlines constricted...
even god couldnt get him uplifted. verse like italic text was ok then just drifted...
ok your multies flowed nice, but made no sense what so ever.. lunchlines constricted? come on man.. That is wicked filler.. but the punch was good imma give you that
kid so autistic he couldnt see niagra if he falls wit rupaul leatards...
fat ass kid asked for a burger clerk said dawg can you risk it?just retards...
Ok ok , first line wack fuckin punch like really wack.. second line, kinda humorous.. it was an ok bar, just think your punchlines through..
likes the soap jail junction then has the nerve to hand me a ::: card?..lmao
we all know in his case it was a "male-function"thug? even viagra aint gettin you hard...
ok this bar was good, def better than the rest of your verse


I see alot, alot, alot, of potentil in your rhymes.. your punches just arnt anything special as of yet.. and some of your multies are really filler.. make sure your verse just doesnt flow, but also makes sense..



The Hype Is Real:
You Just Some Little Punk From Boston
At 15 Your Virginaty You Aint Lost It
Probablly the best bar ive ever seen from you.. but still really wack
Till Now Your Gonna Get Fucked
Your Salad I Tosed It Shit Hit The Fan
you tossed his salad.. lmao.. ok
Like Ya Stuck In A Mosh Pit
Just stop stop with the amazing rhymes


Aint tryin to be mean, but i could write a book to you about a good verse, and i dont think you would comprehend it..




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