Voted For: Crossroads

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Crossroads:

takes 2 keys to make @...but this kid doesn't know
if brains a bomb...you couldn't even blow your nose
Nope Not GOod
@'s a gay homo...his lines are all already all written
You looked intelligent.........until you started spittin'
LOl ok..
kid couldn't spit.....even if The Council lies his claim
kid's living proof....that man can live without a brain
LOL ok..
The cat's fucked....even snail mails delivers on joint
Accepting a battle..............is @'s only strong point
LOl ok
Fact is...this bitch probably barely had drop on time
The kid would lose to the system........who's on 0-1!
Alright good closer..


Your Verse Was Jam Packed Full of Disses to your oppenent, it was a really good battle verse.. It was lacking in punches and wordplay though.. if you get those 2 things along with your hard hitting disses, your text will be off the chain..


"fi-del" aka @:


This bitch doesnt no which way to go.that's why he's crossroad's...
He pack's more fake processed beef than a wendy's boss load's.
ok that was alright
im only one person....but i still lyrically surrond you.
im not sure what your ma said when she found you..
.............................but she shoulda just left you
or instead a calling you her son..shoulda said you the nefue..
wow, that was really terrible, multies were good, but the whole theme, and the way you put it down was terrible.. wow.. just bad..
you relise instead a battling me you shoulda just left ha??
this fag coulda fuck a hoe...if his name was hue hefna..
yea ok.. not good..
im Attacking audiciously..like whip-lash i leave ya with neck abrasion..
you cant pronounce my words ..when you try it cause's annihalition......
first line was good, second line was blah....

ok this just was not a good verse from you, no good punches or disses or anything.. just not a good verse.. sorry to say.. you really need to elevate.. up.. not down.. up...


<<< Kontent >>>

Punches: n/a
Personals: n/a
Flow: Crossroads
wordplay: n/a
disses: Crossroads
vokab: n/a
multies: n/a
internals: n/a
fav line: Crossroads.. kids living proof... that a man can live"
without a brain..
Enjoyment: Crossroads

if you were not in one of those catagories, work on it in your next battle..

You took this battle, lopsided as you can see.. good job..


please return the favor with a vote in my battle against 4fil.. link is in the sig.. THANKS !!!

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