i liked your approach.vocab was simple but that goes back to the approach you took.
i liked how it went from fun to tragic so quickly.twists are great.keep em comin'7/10

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE