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Old 12-01-04, 11:52 AM   #7
Artik Phrost
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Voted For: Drama Queen

v/DRAME QUEEN
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Run away while you can cause i'll leave you Ripped Into Pieces (RIP)
When you drop your lines, the level on the nerd-o-meter increases
I'll smack you around like Serena did on the Holy Grass*
Identity see through like glass, apathic sheep following the mass
Man, i'd even join Al-Quaeda to drop a bomb on the UK
Just so i can stop you from dropping this wack old shit all day
You're no shrink so stop claminig that your rhymes are hypnotic
Dealing with my verse, so psychotic, makes things get chaotic
"Weak emcee murdered by a Killer B" is what you'll see on the BBC
Sorry Oh Mighty England but he simply wasn't my cup of tea

....a lil on tha elementary side, but you were consistent with the punches...the flowing..and wordplays..."I'd even Join AL-Quaeda"....wow...bold one, gurl...eh i'll give it a 7/10...keep battling and readin battles of iLL heads...

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when lifted i burn barz inflit battle scars
never play fare ahm like a daddy-day-care
ahm runnin you raggid
you can diss me on tha votes cuz mah lines them jaggid
u say ur good but ur exagerating again they dont call u drama quenn 4 nuttin
this bicth sent me like 3 pms like "will you battle me"actin like ahm fronttin
i dont give fuck if she he wonna test me or even beat me
ahm servin those bars up like a chinese cook
"may i take you oder plz" ye can i have a 1-2-3 three vote victorey
mah battle stats them hungerey
ahm like a gagit on ya shelf not to be played wit
ya vocad smaller than a migit now thas sayin shit

...elementary...some of it didn't rhyme..or make sense(fourth line)...the flow was choppy....but, you did have some personals in there...i lyked that...but, you need to elevate seriously and keep battling...i'll give it a 5/10....

theres my break down...take it or leave it
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