Fukin sickness embodified Pick, that first verse was absolutely crazyness - structure, flow, lyrics, VOCAB on anuva level, 2nd everse u fell off in places and came off yo flow but u didnt damamge dro 2 hard, 2nd verse had sum questionable vocab aswell, sum of it didnt quite fit or it had 2 many syllables 2 work. jus overly complex, but 2nd verse was still heavy but 1st verse heavy.............


expounded in the opaque facade of dark shade,*
he cascades to the spectral ray's incessant fusillade.*

AND DIS BAR:::

the enclosure subdues the flow of his will,*
like pesticide contaminated chlorophyl.*


THESE TWO LINES ARE JUST HEAVY MAN

overall - 10/10

1st verse - 10/10
2nd verse - 9/10

vocab - 10/10
lyrics - 9.5/10
structure - 9.5/10
wordplay - 10.10
imagery - 10/10
flow - 10/10
originality and thoughts - 10/10
deepness - 10/10 on sum Mos Def elevated 10fold shit

Retun tha favour chek ma dipset battle or terse battle preferably or topical battle and drop an honest vote man.......Peace

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