Why do you constantly say that you know the quality sucks...why don't you just fix it. Read a fucking tutorial and fix your fucking quality.

Now....on to the song. Vocals were too loud. I honestly think you could have made this track ten times better if you just lowered the vocals a little and put a little emotion into what you were spitting. Lyrics were ok.....nothing too special. Flow wasn't bad, but you have an unusual way of not rhyming your words at the end of every bar.....I guess some people like that, but to me it just sounds kinda lame. You'll probably just take this as me hating on you, but if I don't tell you what you need to fix, who will? Anyway, you have potential, but it just seems like you're being lazy. Step up to the plate and show us what you really got

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