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The Ups and Downs of Life
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Originally Posted by Tha Q
#1...Phoenix claims my "flow" is boring because I have a basic rhyme scheme...
hmm...He just put his foot in his mouth because it's obvious he doesn't listen to my shit before he critiques it...or he's jus plain stupid...
Let's examine my "basic" xxxxxxxa/xxxxxxxa rhyme scheme as he put it.
Here's an excerpt of the lyrics from one of my recent tracks:
"And I ain't talkin 7/3, he's never heard/the herb who neva learns eva disturb Q on planet earth, u stay in a skirt/the stains in my shirt remain from my disdain for your worth/ so what I'm sayin is your worth ain't worth more than ur brains in the dirt/it's plain I been irked since the day u claimed u was first/In this food chain, it remains to be heard so what u sayin is absurb/
U ain't got to like what I said...or even HOW I flowed it...but how the FUCK is that a xxxxxa/xxxxxa basic rhyme scheme
get da fuck outta here...
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hmmmm... with the exception of your last track... Im not sure your rhyme scheme is too basic, but you have a boring to listen to flow on most tracks I've heard from you... like I said with the exception of "Hey I"... I honestly really liked that one. But I compare you to triple n kinda... I respect triple and think he got boatloads of talent, but generally his tracks are boring as hell to me, its just opinions on the internet, if it ever pisses you off that bad just unplug. |