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Old 12-01-04, 05:50 PM   #4
Acuity
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nice drop man, - 7/10 ...................chek da structure, lyrics tight, ideas were aight aswell man.................was feelin da line:

Why did the devil chose me to take souls. Why did the devils chose me to give u blow’s. its official the devil chose me to sealed ya fate
Doves wings have fallin. So as god. Black doves soaring through the sky. Now the devil has arrived . Chapter 1 heaven has been force to close the GATE~!

shit was petic....needed 2 b in a poetry peace man, was nice imagery wit da doves n good theme n vocab

nice drop 3 sumin off top of yo head fam

chek ma battle wit terse or topival wit flow intelligent and retrn tha favour wit an honet vote
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