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Old 12-01-04, 08:03 PM   #15
NeptuneHurricane
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King
Feelin this verse. Your start was kinda shaky, but you got better. Another downside was that the 4th bar was played out. Ive heard that shit so many times! Good finisher though. Good strong verse for you. 1 more thing. Try not to use the word "nigger", you might offend somebody. Plus, what if your white?

PntBlnk
Weak verse. It just didn't have punches, and it wasn't clever. Your vocab was pretty minimal, but it had some good multies. If your whole drop would have been like your finisher.....shit, you woulda took this easy.
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