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Old 12-01-04, 09:06 PM   #7
streetryda
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mistuh-okay u had a pretty basic verse here punches were wack you didnt have any personals........no good vocab and ya flow was the only good thing u had.........your structure was off straighten out ya lines...........ya one line made no sense..
Winning chances like leg amputees trying to bunny hop on a bike
^^ you dont need legs to bunny hop u use ur arms

indeph-aight you didnt have too good of vocab here........ya structure was a lot better than banks.......you had some personals on him.......ya punches hit harder............ya had some humor in ya verse......you just overall came harder and you werent as basic......

peace~1
v/indeph.
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