TRICKSTA::


fuck spittin ill 'piss on u',maybe itll mean 'urine' luck/
this 'jobs' truly 'blown',provin u really do 'suck'/

BLAH AT THIS OPENER,URINE LUCK WORDPLAY WAS WEAK MAN,REWORD IT IT WOULD OF BEEN BETTER,AND THE PUNCH WAS TOO BASIC SIMPLE SHIT,NEXT TIME COME HARDER AT THIS POINT OF THE VERSE,MAKE IT AN APPEALING VERSE



tha 'truth hurts' kidd,so stock up on them 'pain killers'/
ur dirty like wacko jacko,a 'fake' an a 'chyld' 'thriller'/

MAN YOUR KILLING ME WITH THAT WACKO JACKO SHT,I DONT HATE ON PEEPS BUT MAN IM NOT LIKEING THE WAY YOU SPITTING,BUT YOUR SETUP WAS OK,I THOUGHT IF YORU PUNCH LINE WAS BETTER IT WOULD OF MADE THE SETUP STICK OUT MORE,BUT THIS WAS TOO BASIC AGAIN


like 'pullin faces' in tha 'wind',ya fortunes gonna 'change'/
like an 'afghan sniper',a victories clearly 'out-of-range'/

NOT TOO BAD,BUT COULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE,IF YOU PUT MORE THOUGHT INTO THIS SHIT,BUT SINCE YOU DIDNT NOT EFFECTIVE


ill stop u readin 'otha lyrics',and cut out ur 'power source'/
u like a one legged 'marathon runna',tha pain takes its 'course'/

OK,BUT NOT HARD THOUGH


each style sound tha same,u recycle like 'eco friendly'/
ya rhymes 'pleasent',it takes more than average 'sickness' to 'offend me'/

BLAH AT THIS FILLER TYPE SHIT,NOT LIKEING THIS AT ALL BOO AT YOU



clearly ripped,cormetas more 'fake' than britney 'lip syncs'/
ya styles 'flushed out',everyone knows yaw 'shit stinks'/

AGAIN TOO BASIC AND SIMPLE SHIT


i 'tripped' u,and sent u 'head ova feet',a 'flipped' 'flop'/
theres no 'karate kid' but yaw still headin for tha 'chop'/

OK,BUT NOT LIKEING THE ENDING,NEED TO COME HARD HERE,MAKE THE READER GO WITH YOU FOR THE WIN


COMETAPHORETUNE::


Tricc, you must be scared out ya 'azz', versus me?, you on some 'shyt'//
Knocc you west out of 'England' to the 'state' of unconsiousness//

OK AT THIS,ALSO NOT EFFECTIVE,DIDNT COME REALLY HARD HERE,BUT WAS BETTER THAN TRICKSTAS,NEED TO REMEMBER COME HARD HERE,COME WITH A GOOD SETUP ,PUNCH COMBO


Say you venomous, but like garner snakes* you spit wit harmlessness//
I'll rip ya muscles off n hang em to see what ya strength harnesses//

NOT BAD HERE,I LIKE THE VISUAL,THE SETUP WAS NICE,BUT DIDNT REALLY DO IT FOR ME WITH THE PUNCHLINE,BUT NOT TOO BAD


I'm rough like sprayin varnishes, and tough, I'll rip you armless bytch//
Set a flame ya carcuss then piss on it to sway the sparks a bit//

I WAS FEELING THIS,I LIKE VISUALS LIKE THIS,PROBABLY THE BEST SETUP PUNCH COMBO IN YOUR VERSE,NICE,IT WILL BE IN PUNCHES


Battlin me? Don't get ahead of ya self, you betta rewind//
Cuz even if it was noon in london, it wouldn't be T* time//

OK,GOOD FLIP HERE,A PLAYED CONCEPT BUT AGAIN NOT BAD OF A FLIP,NOT REALLY HARD THOUGH


I'mma dogg, you's a puss, I spit frees till there's no fee-line*//
Cuz cats get they 'azz' pushed bacc and 'end up'
'behind'//

OK


Like doggystyle, stop cryin cuz you lost wit ya soggy smiles//
Ya runnin short of blind faith like midgets joggin a foggy mile//

NOT BAD,NOT FEELING IT,SETUP OK,BUT DIDNT GO WELL WITH THE PUNCH,THATS WHY ITS NOT TOO EFFECTIVE



Constantly fuccin this homo, let's see how long this fag lingers//
You spit gay constantly droppin ya own keys* like bad fingers//

OK AGAIN,NOT TOO HARD OF AN ENDING,BUT ITS COOL


UMM BOTH VERSES LACKED THE HARD HITTING PUNCHES,BUT COME CAME WITH HARDER ONES THAN TRICKSTA DID,TRICKSTA WORK ON YOUR SETUPS AND PUNCHES BE MORE CREATIVE AND WITTY,AND LOSE THE FILLER SHIT,COMETAPHORTUNE,YOU HAVE POTENTIAL BUT YOU NEED TO BE CONSISTANT,YOU NEED TO SETUP YOUR PUNCHES BETTER ALSO,GOOD SHIT TOO BOTH THOUGH


VOTE COMETAPHORTUNE