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The Tru Force Of Rap
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IP:
Damn.. For some reason i expectd alot more from this battle.. Punchs were basic, wordplay was none evident on Intrin's Part, soulja had some iight metaphors in there.. His rhyme scheme was alot Better, an his punchs were better overall...
I liked the food for thought line, had possiblitie to become pretty ill...
Sin, you were basic... Just reading your first two lines on both battles i could tell you were gunna lose..Extreamly weak punchs... Off flow, weak metaphors... My advice, try out the VVV for awhile, and make your verse more like the end of yours... then move up to the LLbL..
Punchs-Soulja
Meta's-^^^
Rhyme Scheme-^^^
Vocab- ^^^
Multi-tie..
vote= SOulja
OnE
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