Cause you’ve truly have broken an long relationship love chain
Left my heart with hot burnt bruises like it was left in an hot sand
You gave me an stomach virus, this heart-broke giving me twist and turns
the love I have eatin up has came out, look how red it is, moving firmly
I do not wish seeing u and him kissing around me, it’ll make me feel I have no-pride
But go ahead, do it, then I’ll take the open bible, close it, and let the hell in me arise
^real poetry right here... dayum, u got skillz and ur metaphors are very nice, ur last two lines i easily saw what you meant and all... u have a nice way of using words, and a nice flow came outta this piece, it was a short piece but the content was heavily extended.. make sure you keep writing..
nice job fam...
~Lady Fiya~
...pz...

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