I didn't hear the song.....I guess I should try listening again....

.....no, I just hear the beat again. Like I said before (I think) I'm not a knowledgable beat person, but you should really try to make the beat go on the same tempo as the sample. I kinda hear a voice in the background to.....Also, the beat should be soft like the sample. I think you should honestly spend more time listening to the beat and less time trying to add little changes to the beat. Listen to the beat at the end witht he sample "I live for the funk, I die for the funk." Do you hear how drastically different that sounds than your beat?

Honestly, If you didn't have the sample in there, that shit would sound on point and people would ask you if you just DLed the instrumental, so I suggest either slowing down your beat and softening up your instruments or getting rid of the sample and making the hook yourself to

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