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Old 08-02-02, 11:51 PM   #20
rar one
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Time for some constructive critisum

IP:

God, this battle was the wackest ive seen in awhile...

Sketchm you Flow was worthless... You punchs Mediocre.. Your metaphors were the only thing that might make you worth battling.. LoL please,i remember you bitching about Thug Mentality Having dick ryders, LoL thug might may have had D/r but at least he had Skill, vocab was bad, and so were your multis.. In other words you were pretty basic all the way around.. LoL an Lemmie guess, your probly an Skyhawk to huh?

Well Outofsite.. Frankly it looks like you just started rapping...
The only thing you did was Rhyme.. Everything else was a filler... No punchs,metaphors,multis,ect...

Now Ill admit, i was alot harder on sketch, but if your working metaphors, you should be at a higher level then that.. That an IF he is one of the people i think he is, thats sad...

Vote-sketch-rydaz

Metaphors-sketch-rydaz
Punchs-Sketch- Rydaz
Rhyme Scheme- Outofsite
Vocab-sketch-rydaz
Multis-tied

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