hmmm
6/10
personally i liked your other one better...
your fonts have gotten better but look at it, all the colors of the fonts are different and they dont match the picture what so ever
you should make kanye bigger, and make your subtext much smaller, and dont have it go over him...
the backround is plain, oh and you shouldnt of taken out seattle...
still got a lot of stuff to do, but its a nice start i guess

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