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Old 12-03-04, 08:44 AM   #15
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Black Poet
 
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Damme this was a pretty hott battle by both,.. This
was the hottest I have seen JR...

But you didn't get much info on VA coz if you did you
would know that he is a she lol so to me some of the
punches didn't hit as hard... You need to look in to
this shit...

Best punch VA:
this beef ya dont want, you should've ducked like the bush campaign.
said youd rape me. but like portopotees, i left ya tooch in viens.
well, times up. ya seem consumed, overwhelmed and confused.
i guess you can say verbal left amused...
^The close from VA was sicck, great flow, hott vocab
hard hitting punches hott word play...

JR Best punch:
My shit is BRUTAL~and~VICIOUS...In this battle jR's like a "CHEMIST" doing~DIVISION//
Cause I'm Quick to make you HEAD "DIVIDE" quicker than NUCLEAR~FISSION// (Nuclear Fission DIVIDES Atoms)
^ I was feeling this punch hit hard like the wordplay..
hott vocab decent flow...

But you should write the explenations after the verse
coz it messes up your structure little bit of advise.

VA won this battle with hard hitting punches great vocab
great structure...

JR come dope dont get me wrong man your shits elevate
a lot, just a few of the personals u tried to use didn't hit
like I said before. wordplay was great flow ok could have
been better punches nice.

Stay up both...

Please hit a battle up in my sig...

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