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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

Flows Verse

Punches: Were aight but only a couple were eye catching in my opinion which was dissapointing also the fact that you were using self-glory really to me seemed like you were wasting lines whereas a lil re-wording could've reinforced the verse

Personals: Not many to be honest 1 or 2 but woulda been helpful seeing as your opponent put a few on you.

Vocab: Some nice wording good vocab indeed i had no arguments with that it was quite good

Structure: Could be improved didn't help the flow in parts but i'm guessing this was rushed so not much time to add finishing touches.

Flow: Nice flow but like i said slipped a lil in parts where it went real long in certain places work on that for future references.

Rhyming: real good rhyming in there was quite enjoyable if only the self-g bits and punches were harder though.

WICKED's Verse

Punches: Seemed like you tried but not really effective i think Flow pipped you there i'm afraid try and work on them again for future references.

Personals: Personals Dayum that was mainly your content of the verse jus throwing personals in there but parts of your verse were damaged by the self-glory again like Flows but you def took it here.

Vocab: Grr angry style you did seem angry and the personals and the dissing made up for punches which actually is unique coz get punches and you got a dope mix to do even better up in RV. But try and avoid the constant swearing though lol.

Structure: Stretched...work on it like i said lose some swear words...you'll probably find thats your solution.

Flow: However flow i had no real problems wit prolly coz the beat i read it too but i felt the flow to this so thumbs up there.

Rhyming: Basic but effective with the personals used i think try and up your wordplay and your rhyming wil develop naturally.

V/WickedClown because it really boiled down to 3 main things punches, personals & the level of dissing...and WC took 2 outta 3 because the weight of the personals added to the level of dissing and really thats what wins battles.