Voted For: Mark Greyson
RV knows you’re a clown, just some fuckin british punk
dopeness speaks for itself… n' told you to shut the fuck up…
^^okay punch but the end of the lines don rhyme....
ya structures shitty… and I’ll show you what worse is,
shoot holes in ya body, like the ones you have in ya verses…
^^decent coulda been a lil better
in less than 10 lines sure ‘nough Mark’ll beat a chick down,
since Elusive eluded himself to girl faster than Spanish nouns…
^^haha this was good.....
leave you soaked in piss n’ blood.. don’t move or budge,
Elusive… can’t hold his water so how can he hold a grudge..?
^^nice multi's okay punch
right now is the time in which we call you a homeless bitch,
and ask about your kitchen…
..........................How'd you ever make a studio out of shit?
^^okay punch coulda been a lil better
okay punches..some were kinda weak...nice multi's...okay vocab....good structure....some humor....good
6/10
Mark Greyson, man what the fuck is up wit ur rap name
Sounds like a pop singa, not a rappa, a pawn strivin 4 fame
^^okay punch woulda been better if it was worded dif..
If dats ur actual name, ur parents had a laugh naming ur ass
They were sittin dere jokin, he gonna get bullied in class
^^weak punch....basic
It aint like ur rhymes make up 4 ur current "namely" position
Ur punches hit but they're weak, like ur firing blank ammunition
^^good punch....
U aint got skills, u aint neva ate an Mc, ur dieing of malnutrition
Even wit RV international elevation aid, ull b needin physicianz
^^weak...coulda been worded a lil better
Ma rhymez are elevated, university level, i shud write a dissertation
ur rhymes r wack, we all know u didnt come close to graduation
^^weak.had self glorifyin which made it weaker..
ya had some basic but some good vocab towards the end..........ya structure was good....punches were weaker than Mark........no multi's so ya flow was kinda off......shoulda came a lil harder and ya prolly woulda got my vote.....
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