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Old 12-03-04, 05:22 PM   #13
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Voted For: Class.Sic

IE.-had too many strectched lines in your verse. some of ur punches didnt make sense(and im not simple-minded). but on tha brighter note, u came hard with multies and mettaphores i think. u had some nice fillers in there, and some creative rhyming wordplay, but i think ur verse wasnt as hard as it should be
Class.Sic-u had a hard verse. yo punches killed him to me, but u also had some stretched lines at tha beginning, only because it sounded like u switched up ur style near tha end, which fucked up ur structure, but it was coo. u had some nice rhyming words in there for tha most part. but i think u should work on staying on point when battling.
overall- i gave this up to class.sic simply because he had harder punches, and some nice mettaphores in his verse. his shit made more sense also...I.E. had a coo verse,but i seriously/HONESTLY dont think u came as hard as class.sic did...and i seen better shit from u, real talk...

but good battle yalll...return tha vote...HONEST plz...link in sig...
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