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Structure- Very Basic But Delivered Ya Message Sweet. Kept Me Wanting To Read Cos It Was Easy To Follow and Visualize What Ya Trying To Say.8/10
Vocab-Good Vocab Kept It Domestic Which Is Cool, Some Word's I Had To Look Up! lol, 7/10.
Overall-This Was a Dope Piece Of Poetry/OM Entry, I See It As a Little Bit Of a Tribute To Pac's Meaning's In His Lyriz, Which I ain't Seen Before, Delivered In Someone Else's Message. Nice Originality. 8.5/10.
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