Blah@this battle.
Not really good.

Wreckage: Work on your structure...concepts for punches and shit. For a battle this long, you should drop something decent. All that talking between the verse in unecessary. Just write your verse. Your punches were type simple. Work on some new ideas, just look around that room or something, you can find some lines.

Loveliss: Dropped garb too. Italics@the end of each lines? Looks gay, punches were weak, simple, played. Didn't like it. Work on that too. Your structure is geey. You don't have to do all that, just write ya verse, don't spilt no lines.

both need work

Holla !

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