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Old 12-03-04, 10:17 PM   #40
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Voted For: String9487

String-Punches were 3 times better than his. Thats pretty much why you got my vote. I ain't gonna pay attention to structure and all that. It ain't important

Faceless-Your punches weren't really hittin at all. Most of your verse was boring. Just make it enjoyable for the people to read and u would had it. no hate. just a pointer
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