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Old 12-03-04, 11:36 PM   #24
Wickedclown
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Voted For: RED BEAM

this battle was ass... no hate to either of yall but it was ass... heres my breakdown for yall

Heavy-... ive never seen you on here before but you had an aight verse i guess... punches hit ok in SOME places but in others didnt hit at all.... personals...eeh, not really... structure was stretched and didnt work... wordplay was aight, creativity and flow were ok as well... overall id say elevate but i give it a 5/10

RED- good flow in this, liked that... structure was hit and miss.. long lines and short lines so structure wasnt hot... personals and punches won this for you tho cause those hit... wordplay and creativity were fairly good too..... overall i give this verse 7/10


overall RED got this one... and to Heavy, this aint a hate vote because RED just voted against me in a BIG battle... so this aint a hate vote at all.... just an all around honest vote dawg.... any way good battle to both of yall...................

VOTE- REDBEAM........................................... ......