lmao.....you do know that you don't need to put the beat in the background. You can put the beat on a seperate track in cool edit, that's why there are so many tracks. Anyway, you should try to ride the beat better. You kinda lacked emotion.....just sounded like you were reading. Anyway, this kinda sounded like a freestyle. Personals were there.....lol @ more threads about me than battles up. I liked that one.You can use a little help on the production side of things. I suggest reading a tutorial or two, or getting a mentor that will work with you. You might think that it'll take too long to get your songs/disses out, but once you get the shit down, it only takes like five minutes to mix the shit. Anyway, it wasn't that bad for a first drop....keep dropping, you can only get better

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