Your verse average it had flow and there were some good lines.

best line:
thinks he has me, but he get kicked to the curb so badly..
forgot to put his name, on the list of herbs in his avy..

worst line:
quit trying, nobody wanna hear none of your dam rhymes..
kid took a step for mankind... and blew up from landmines..
^^it had no real relivance with him

like i said it was a average verse

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