umm...

Things that need improvement- Structure, Take the ("") characters outta your verse.. don't use caps lock makes it seem more "noobish"

..well it was decent, some played lines like the terrorist lines, etc. but some decent lines, a nyce flow with some multies also..

hit mine's up- http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163796

stay up..

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