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Old 08-03-02, 03:33 PM   #13
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BREAKDOWN:::

IP:

REALIZE::


your wrecked and i could be a crappy counselor ya see;
say get shit off ya chest, but i wouldnt want any on me;

OK OPENER,NOT REALLY HARD AT ALL,I THOUGHT IF YOU CAME HARD HERE IT WOULDNT SEEM TOO BASIC OF A START


shits easy, the 80's,then 'bullets' will begin to over react;
cuz i'm shootin more than 'washingtons' old nba draft;*

OK SHIT HERE,NOT HARD,ALSO NOT EFFECTIVE


i'm a 'detective' to see ya gay acts, then take a meat clever;
cuz i'm 'catching this guys passes' mo than a wide receiver;

AGAIN NOT BAD,NOT HARD HITTING EITHER


rhyme reaver, ya flow has somewhat of a desert drout;
remove ya shoulder plate, and lets see wha ya can dish out;

THIS WAS NICE,I FELT THE SETUP TAKES AWAY MOST OF THE EFFECTIVENESS TO THE PUNCH,JUST HAVE TO WORK ON THE WAY YOU SETUP THIS TYPE OF LINE


it's about me being tight and maybe even a scolar;
drench ya neck with soda cuz i'll be quick to pop ya collar;

AGAIN NICE SHIT,BUT SETUP FLAWED,NOT AN EFFECTIVE PUNCH,BUT WAS GOOD


i'll take ya shoulder again and put it under ya to sedate;
fuck pitches i'll use text to strike ya out over the plate;**

OK,NOT REALLY FEELING IT,I KNOW WHERE YOUR GOING,BUT DIDNT FEEL THIS LINES


debate that you suck and you need more gay bosses;
if defeats are bats, i'll make sure ya get hit wit alot of losses;

OK

more tosses, kid we got 'proof your gay' so ya not novist;
kick ya gay ass to mississippi, cause i 'state' the obvious;

THIS WAS A NICE PUNCH,NOT TOO EFFECTIVE THOUGH


like only titty suckers, your close to a dick licker;
scar ya record so you'd think it was scratch n sniff sticker;

SORTA FUNNY,NOT HARD THOUGH



beat cha quicker and there is nothing you can say bra;
this cat cant be touched, an it's to bad the vets got to ya;

NOT LIKEING IT


this battle is like your head cuz i'm winning an it's swell;
took his last opponets verse, but this time he'll bite the L;

NOT TOO BAD,BUT REWORD THIS TYPE OF SHIT,IT WOULD OF CAME ALOT HARDER


This kids back is killin him, cuz i'm beatin him with his spine;
I'm playin hide n seek with ur brain, an you've lost ya mind;

NICE ENDING,COULD OF CAME A TAD HARDER,BUT THIS WAS NICE SHIT




MC4EYEZ::


No show? I've got a life, while you're just a worthless geek
Good think you posted early; I'd hate to think that took a week

OK OPENER,COOL SHIT HERE,DIDNT HIT TOO HARD BUT EFFECTIVE IN A SENCE


My punches have you like a crackhead, the way you take hits
Your name lies; I'm the Real-Eyez, you're just a fake bitch

NOW THIS I WAS FEELING AND LIKEING,IT HIT HARD GOOD SHIT


Little punk, probably running with a weak spineless crew...
Who couldn't go 3-0 if you were police minus two

I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN HERE,BUT I DIDNT LIKE THIS,IT COULD OF BEEN REWORDED ALOT BETTER FOR A BETTER EFFECT


You only get to second base when your rub your own man tits
You're not an artist; you just think so as you're hitting the canvas

OK,NOT EFFECTIVE NOR HARD HITTING


Leave your eye blackened and swollen like you're winking; I'm sick
You only grasp the mic tightly because you think it's my dick

WEAK CONCEPT HERE,PRETTY MUCH PLAYED SHIT,NOT REALLY LIKEING IT EITHER


Veteran? Nah, you're just a bitch that I'm better than
My punches reach the Top Ten like I was David Letterman

BLAH AT THIS,FILLER TYPE SHIT HERE


Bitch, if you're number one, I need to be measured in decimals
You're such a pussy that your ass cheeks outnumber your testicles

THIS WAS FUNNY,BUT NOT REALLY HARD,BUT EFFECTIVE


I've got your spine jarred; so go home and learn how to rhyme hard
Your face is taking more punches than a workaholic's time card

NOT BAD


Realize can't hold a candle to me, so now I have to slap this cat
Telling me to match your bars...bitch, I can't rhyme as wack as that

AGAIN NOT BAD,WAS OK,NOT TOO HARD


Any rhymes I spit against you are nothing but a waste of rap
So I'll just knock your cheek bones out and watch your fuckin' face collapse

DECENT ENDING,I WAS FEELING IT,BUT IT WASNT HARD REASON WHY THE SETUP THREW THE PUNCH OFF,NOT LIKEING THE SETUP MUCH,BUT PUNCH WAS GOOD


UMM BOTH CAME GOOD,WHERE ONE EXCELLED THE OTHER FLAWED,WHICH WASNT ALL THE TIME,THIS IS KINDA OF A HARD BATTLE TO DECIDE CAUSE REALIZE CAME WITH SOME NICE PUNCHES AND SO DID MCEYEZ,I THINK IM GOING TO VOTE ON CONSISTANCY THOUGH,WHICH REALIZE WON ON AND HE GETS THE VOTE,MCEYEZ WAS CONSISTANT BUT NOT ALL THE TIME,SOME SHIT SEEMED A LITTLE FORCED AND RUSHED,BUT WAS OK SHIT,NOTHING TOO APPEALING EXCEPT THE 3LINES I LIKED,ALSO REALIZE CAME AS WELL AS GOOD,BUT KEPT THE SHIT CONSITANT,IT WASNT HARD TO FOLLOW MOST OF THE TIME


VOTE REALIZE