i like how you talk about the world, and bring other topics into play... u always bring the reality topics to poetry, and i think that's good.. cuz sum people don't know what the hell is going on in the world up to date... nice vocab, emotion was consistent
Maybe we hate all cuz we differ in opinion's and statements...
But we don't only suffer of hatred, wut about low pay wages...
There, familes for month's only crums from garbage have been tasted..
There's more that got it worst, so you don't even know wut pain is...
^i liked these lines best, the last line was very nicely put cuz it's the truth..

nice piece of work, i was really feeling this, i read it twice also... aight, pz..

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