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Old 12-04-04, 06:43 PM   #13
Zeke
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Skriptz:
Your Vocabulary Was Decent Had Some Decent Words,
Structure Was Also Decent The Lines Kind Of Lined Up A Little.....Punches Was There...It Was Hitting Hard...I Kind Of Like How It Just Flowed Out...Good Verse...9.5/10


ViVid:
Seriously Vocabulary Was The Most Decent Here...Along With Your Structure..Punches Hmm I Was Never Feeling It If You Call It Punches.... But It Was A Decent Flow.....Untill You Spit The Last Three Lines Wasnt That Good..Kind Of Sloppy First Three Was Better Then Last Three....8.5/10

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