ECK-LIPSE::


life aint a sprint but a marathon, runnin on ya sentances,
*ya effort's present..buuuut..ya talent's absent-kid..

NOT BAD OF AN OPENER,I FELT THE SETUP WAS WAY BETTER THAN THE PUNCH,I FEEL YOU SHOULD MAKE THEM EQUAL OR THE PUNCH MORE POWERFUL,BUT NONETHELESS GOOD


YOU WACK! but expressin-it with emphisis is irrelevent..
*learn ya words! vocabulary definitions indefinate,

OK,NOT REALLY LIKEING THE VOCAB,BUT COOL


UNINTELLIGENT!..*but ya verse SPEAKS for ITSELF!,>>
*from the pure simplicity of ya text to your personal stupidity~INDEPTH

I WAS FEELING THIS,NOT TOO HARD BUT ALSO NOT EFFECTIVE,DECENT SHIT

mis-directed repititions, dis-respectin ya reputation
*ya effort-wasted, omnipotent flow, scattered in several-places

OK


*unreadable, 'read it?' in fact I DIDNT EVEN..writin a testament..i'll FUKK you up EARLIER than ADAM and EVE-DID..*geez-kid, quit rebellin you've explored wack's limits, *we're all ENTITLED to STUPIDITY, but you ABUSIN THA PRIVLEDGE!..god wasted precious time constructin your *existance..burn in hell b/tch, gettin raped by devils dicks..you finished..!!

TOO ME THIS WAS COOL,BUT SOME PARTS STRETCHED AND FORCED,BUT NOT BAD


actually, im feelin a bit malicious..imprison this misfit midget while whippin children who refuse to labour..KILL *YOURSELF,..pleease, do us a favor...so i guess it HURTS to HELP!, WISEST thing you can manage is a BURP or BELCH..

ALSO NOT BAD,NOT HARD NOT EFFECTIVE EITHER


unworth of mother-nature, really, you dont deserve-her,
BEGGIN for BRAINS kid you must be a SLOW LEARNER..

SORTA FUNNY,OK


i put lyrical invalids in slipknots, better edit ya spit kid, my lyrics is like glocks...
*get out this league and start ya own league - the Special Olympics of Hip Hop..

HAH GOOD FLIP ON THE CONCEPT,NOT BAD AT ALL,IWAS FEELING THIS


now study my style & get inspired by pure innovation...
...whoever the hell you tryna spit like, it's a poor imitation!!

TOO BASIC


cats sleep on ya - narcoleptic cuz ya rhymes are sedatives..
*and your votes?? betta thank God for aim & private messages!!...

AGAIN NOT BAD,SETUP WAY OVERPOWERS THE PUNCH,MAYBE IF YOU REWORDED THE PUNCH WOULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE


bet you'll bite this tightness & swipe my newest scriptures
*damn kid, you even got more "bitch moves" than strippers!!..

NICE HERE,HIT HARD


**ima DISLEXIC MURDERER, make sure this NEWBIE-HURTS
single spits devour spirits, killed ya soul with this ill verse

NOT FEELING THE ENDING,NEED TO REMEMBER TO HIT HARD HERE,MAKE THE READER LOVE IT


D.O.T.::


After this cat he'll be a "synonym for cucumber" (Vegitable)
he got 2 much time wit "more posts" than "member number"

NOT FEELING THIS OPENER,SETUP WAS WEAK,I GOT WHAT YOUR SAYING BUT IT WAS WEAK,THEN YOU CAME WITHA BAD PUNCH

he get's dumber and i know i might sound shady man
but i gotta make like wrestlin... no belts held by canadians...

I FELT THIS,I WATCH WRESTLING AND I GET THIS,SO NOT BAD


got his "thurst for fame" leave-un
by spottin out jus cause he "uses *Stars" he'll "neva be one"

NOT FEELING THIS EITHER,NOT HITTING HARD OR EFFECTIVE

doesn't make me shutter
knowin he "hyphened" his name cause this cat has a "studder"

BLAH AT THIS


this title's my goal
and my streak proves i'm like butter... on a roll...

OK,BUT PLAYED SHIT


he can't "bear" to admit he's "dead" and fadin
tryin to spit "sweetness" but he's not "Walter Payton"

I KNOW WHERE YOUR GOING HERE,BUT NOT FEELING IT,SORTA SIMPLE SHIT,NOT HITTING HARD


how come his name's "eck-lipse" but he gettin "sonned"
he "sick" cause i'm so "cold" i got his "sences numbed"

AGAIN NOT FEELING THIS SHIT,NOTHING HITTNG HERE


guess this cat listen's to "pop" and thinks he's "with it"
cause he got a "sexual disorder" that we call a "limp bizkit"

SORTA FUNNY,BUT NOT EFFECTIVE OR HARD


i got his "Kandi" and love that "ho"
cause i can "whip out a limp dick" and she'll "taste the rainbow"

NOT FEELING THE ENDING,THE SETUP WAS REALLY WEAK,PUNCH NOT BAD,I LIKED IT,BUT PLAYED,NEED TO COME HARD HERE


UMM I HAVE TO GIVE THIS TO ECKLIPSE,HE HAD MORE HARDER PUNCHES,DOT YOU CAME REALLY WEAK THIS TIME AROUND WITH ALOT OF WEAK PUNCHES TOO BASIC SHIT MAN,NEXT TIME COME HARDER OR POST EARLIER.


VOTE ECKLIPSE,YO MAN CUT DOWN ON MOST OF THAT USELESS VOCAB IT WEAKENS THE FLOW AND PUNCH,USE VOCAB ONLY A LITTLE AT ATIME