Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

.Ima rock-this-kid, sock-this-bitch, he's not-the-shit..
..Pop-him-quick, and fill his lungs with more than oxygen..
(NICE USE OF MULTIES, BUT WEAK OPENER, AND DIDNT END CORECTLY...7/10)

..The glock-just-rips, there's no stopping-this, I'll bomb-this-cat..
..Understand-this, like Atlantis, I'ma blow you off-the-map..
(AGAIN NICE MULTIES, WORD PLAY GOOD 7/10)

..You're soft-and-wack, get shot-in-the-dome, you're not-in-the-zone..
..And like 'cold periods', you're never 'hot-with-your-flow'..
(FLOW WASNT THERE, NICE PUNCHES THO, 6/10)

..I'm the God-with-the-chrome, and there aint no argue-I'm-killin'..
..Shit, I got more 'hot sauce' in my rhymes, than on my 'barbequed-chicken'..
(FUNNY ENDER, DECENT HITS, AND MULTIES, 7/10)

MAGIK...YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT, KINDA WEAK FROM YOUR PREVIOUS, BUT ITS COOL STILL...YOUR USE OF MULTIES KILLED THAT DUDE FOR SURE, THE VOCAB WAS DECENT, THE WORDPLAY WAS AIGHT...JUST WORK ON EVERYTHING FLOWIN TOGETHER WITHOUT HAVIN TO STOP AND THINK ABOU TI...


IP:


blak magic is a faggit/if he had a bitch I would smack it/going against me is like getting stuck in some traffik/im gangsta you just a wanksta/Im gonna shank ya and rob your money from the banker/this battle for you was a mistake/Im taking it like it was a piece of cake/its microcker and I'll tell u like this/You cant fuck with this you little bitch/

AIGHT YOUR VERSE I WACK MAN...TO PLAIN, NO GOOD PUNCHES, AND YOUR STRUCTURE IS WAY OFF...SO IT IN BARS...EXAMPLE

BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BITCH
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH SNITCH....U C WAT I MEAN...

aight magik takes this battle easily...he had better punches, multies, structure, vocab, creativity, and flow...so vote goes to magic

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