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Old 12-04-04, 09:46 PM   #17
Parallel
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Voted For: Elusiv G

Mark:
RV knows you’re a clown, just some fuckin british punk
dopeness speaks for itself… n' told you to shut the fuck up…
3/10

ya structures shitty… and I’ll show you what worse is,
shoot holes in ya body, like the ones you have in ya verses…
4/10

in less than 10 lines sure ‘nough Mark’ll beat a chick down,
since Elusive eluded himself to girl faster than Spanish nouns…
2/10?

leave you soaked in piss n’ blood.. don’t move or budge,
Elusive… can’t hold his water so how can he hold a grudge..?
2/10?

right now is the time in which we call you a homeless bitch,
and ask about your kitchen…
..........................How'd you ever make a studio out of shit?
5/10

elusiv G:
Mark Greyson, man what the fuck is up wit ur rap name
Sounds like a pop singa, not a rappa, a pawn strivin 4 fame
6/10

If dats ur actual name, ur parents had a laugh naming ur ass
They were sittin dere jokin, he gonna get bullied in class
7/10

It aint like ur rhymes make up 4 ur current "namely" position
Ur punches hit but they're weak, like ur firing blank ammunition
8/10

U aint got skills, u aint neva ate an Mc, ur dieing of malnutrition
Even wit RV international elevation aid, ull b needin physicianz
5/10

Ma rhymez are elevated, university level, i shud write a dissertation
ur rhymes r wack, we all know u didnt come close to graduation
6/10

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