vote/E.S.

Whyte Ave.. I know you from RB..I seen better
it seems yours lacked any emotional content..due
to its narriative theme..which doesn't really fit into topicals..
use more emotion..and please fix the structure..

E.S.
wow fam..I aint know you was this good..I sware
I neva thought of you in anyway had this much talent..
it had alot of emotion in here..and I can see your
true veiw upon this,and you really seem mad lol
mad is good...and vocab really stuck out..untill you said fag lol
I actually thought that before Nos said it..but you did mad good

you win this...easy.../vote:Elemental Soul

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